On the other hand, I think the proposed shirt is too bright and cheery.
It looks like the front of a scientology handbook. Let's keep in mind
here that we're fighting the dark forces of oppression, not promoting
some euphoria-inducing drug/music group tour/religion for the masses.
I hope there are plenty of the black background variety in XL.
Peter
pet peeves inc
(perhaps not the most helpful of input, but considering i have no
clue with illustrator, it's all i've got. sorry.)